Tuesday, April 1, 2014

Wakatere speed writing

This morning we had to completed a speed writing challenge in 10 minutes. Here is my writing that I had to completed in just 10 minutes.

Tiaki Taonga means to care for other people and you show that you care for the people around you. You should always show that you care for other people around you cause if you are you are showing that you care for them. You should never judge the way people look like or sound like too. At Pt England school our number one thing we do is to treat everyone equally. If you are anywhere you should always show that you care for other people around you even if you don’t know them and they don’t know you you still need to show Tiaki Taonga caring. Never judge people about there looks even if they are not pretty you should not judge the way they look they are pretty in there on way. We always show that we are great role models. Tiaki Taonga show that you care for every body in the hole world.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Wakatere, I like the way you talked about speed and also about many interesting stuff. You really improved with your writing but most of all you improved with your thinking and positiveness. Great work! Keep up your fantastic skills and live your life to greatness.